加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
Wan Ying's family Wang ying's family, is from GuangZhou.WangYing's like rice and eat rice every meal.He likes to help Mum with cooking on Sunday.he doesn't like yellow and blue.He has a lot of lovely toys and he likes them very much.he likes his family very much.Wan ying's hobby is very much.