小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

I have many teachers,but Miss Liu is my favourite teacher. She is very tall and slender,and she has got a long ,black and wavy hair.A pair of shinning big eyes is on her lovely face ,Her charming smile is impressive.She teaches us English every day.She is a very kind person who will help others without a heistate.In her spare time ,she always stays with us playing chess,surprisingly she is good at it,so I admire her very much.She also plays tennis.With a slender body ,long black flowing hair, it is a dreadly beautiful scene.We all love her very much.