2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇，也能较准确地使用高级词汇。

From the data of the picture shown above,we can see that the higher the degree is,the lower the unemployment rate is.Similarly,with the degree upgrading,the median weekly earnings are increasing.So there is a close relationship between the degree and the wage. Indeed,the reality is the situation what I analyzed above.Many people pursuit the higher degree for seeking jobs easily and getting satisfying salaries.But,on the contrary, the person whose degree is decent hunts jobs more difficult than others although their wages is evned when they catch their jobs.And the person who is low degree seeks jobs easier than the higher because most of them don't care for the quality of the jobs so seriously though their salaries is low. Concerning the job markets competition are intense,most people are competitive,especially the person who owned high degree diplomas.Equivaletly,the most intense competitions also are among that people.