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sunny, last Sunday, the students of Grade One Middle school went home.On sunday,he always went playing basketball and soccer.He oftep helped his mother to do chores and washed the dishes.Sometimes he did exercises a lot,because he want stranger than any other.he want to one of the strangest people in the world.he was me.
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