文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误。
sunny, last Sunday, the students of Grade One Middle school went home.On sunday,he always went playing basketball and soccer.He oftep helped his mother to do chores and washed the dishes.Sometimes he did exercises a lot,because he want stranger than any other.He wants to one of the strangest people in the world.He was me
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