可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
I used to live in a beautiful small town with green trees all around it.The river,running through the town,had clean water in which fish could be seen swimming in groups. The house, however, were small and simple, and the street wasn't wide enough to run cars. People here worked hard all year round yet lived a life of no more than poverty.