2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文章在句法方面做的很棒，复杂句的比例可适当提高；高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

However, some others who contend that the shortcomings of the new technology, network fraud, phishing scam and network theft still arising. So the government enact laws to attack cyber-crime in order to protect online security. My view is that duo to individual attitude toward the internet promulgate new laws to protect the internet users right