2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文章层次较为清晰。

Also through law reform makes the social productive forces developing and economic booming. For instance, fiscal policies backing up small enterprise expansion should be formulate and woven into the legal research and aim to creating more job positions. My view is that a new policy should make informed determinations the percentage of universities