2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Also through law reform makes the social productive forces developing and economic booming. For instance, fiscal policies backing up small enterprise expansion in order to aim at creating more job positions. My view is that a new policy should make informed determinations the percentage of universities should be formulate and woven into the legal research