2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；全文结构较为严谨；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用。

Also through law reform makes the social productive forces developing and economic booming. For instance, fiscal policies backing up small enterprise expansion should be formulate written into the bill in order to aim at creating more job positions. My view is that a new policy should make informed determinations the percentage of universities