2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Also through law reform makes the social productive forces developing and economic booming. For instance, fiscal policies backing up small enterprise expansion should formulate written into the bill in order to aim at creating more job positions. My view is that a new policy should make informed determinations the percentage of universities