2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

By reading for the articles which are address the relationship between the law and the attitude as well as beliefs of the people. Public have traditionally considered attitude and beliefs are motivated largely by legislation. Legally, most experts consent the laws tell us how to better safeguarded social order and justice and playing the big roles for shaping attitude and