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1993年专四作文真题范文:My Idea of Becoming a Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 00:43浏览次数:1440
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Most students want to become a business person, some want to work in a government department, and only a few want to be a teacher. I'm one of the few. I think teaching is a noble job, and it is beneficial, too. China is now developing her economy, which cannot be achieved without a solid foundation of science and technology. Without education, advanced science and technology is out of the question. It's safe to say that teachers play a decisive role in the country's economic development. Besides the importance of their job, China's teachers enjoy a lot of special benefits. The job is secure; salaries are guaranteed, and there are two vacations in a year, of which people in other occupations are often jealous. One is a month long and the other lasts two months. It's glorious to do what the country most needs us to do. And personally I like the profession of teaching.

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