文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
Most students want to become a business person, some want to work in a government department, and only a few want to be a teacher. I'm one of the few. I think teaching is a noble job, and it is beneficial, too. China is now developing her economy, which cannot be achieved without a solid foundation of science and technology. Without education, advanced science and technology is out of the question. It's safe to say that teachers play a decisive role in the country's economic development. Besides the importance of their job, China's teachers enjoy a lot of special benefits. The job is secure; salaries are guaranteed, and there are two vacations in a year, of which people in other occupations are often jealous. One is a month long and the other lasts two months. It's glorious to do what the country most needs us to do. And personally I like the profession of teaching.