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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Life in college will be quite different from that in middle school.First,The burden of study in college is much slighter than in middle school.In college,students do not need to finish a lot of homework and they can study what they are interested in.Secondly,students will gain more freedom to do whatever they want.They can attend societies,join sports club,reading novels and even take internships.Finally,college students are allowed to have a relationship.As we can see,many students have a boyfriend or girlfriend after entering college. Some students are working hard in the self-study room , some students are dripping ping sweat on the playground, and others may be sleeping late in dormitories, the beautiful dream can loose the first class or lecture fluently, because nobody has the duty to wake them up. This is a normal morning in the college. Many middle school students were eager to go through a most relaxing and liberating life,believing the college is the best choice. However, some college freshmen find that the fact is different to their imagination. In the middle school, many students were tired with the endless exercise and exams, but they stand, and did not give up ,waiting for the arriving of the national examination. Because their teachers chanted that you can get the forever freedom after June. Then the college life appeared before us. I now realize the words that our teachers said is right. However, the unimaginable freedom only depend on ourselves.we can select to only work hard as we studied in the middle school; we can select to join in colorful clubs,loosing ourselves; we can select to do volunteers to service the society; we can even select only to live and pack the studies away. There are no absolute freedom, but we have unstinted rights to select or reject. When we were lambs,we were sealed in the middle school, dying to run away. Now we are the freshmen of XI’AN JIAO TONG university,we get the relative freedom,at the same time, more responsibilities are placed on our shoulders. Distant views are waiting for us to taste,and in college, we need to do it all by ourselves.
