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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇丰富度要加强。

用户练习作文:

Contemporarily,accessing a individual via their appearance is a new and bitter truth in society. ugly as it was, just 2 decades ago, scracely have the public made comments on other' looking and folks treat anyone just through the efforts, outcomes as well as personalities they possess. Moreover,the reason for appraising individuals by their surface apperance being misleading could be listed as follow. Initially, it is more crucial for folk to take into account other's characters, capacities and if he or she have taken their own painstaking endeavor to obtain something by a rational and advisable methods.

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