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I have a good friend. shi is my classmate,we met in the classroom last year.she have a pair of beautiful eyes.her skin is white.she loves to help others. one day ,i fell down in the forest,and she saw me and runned to help me .since then ,we become a good friend.we do our homework together,we play outside together.we love each other.