2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

The company's main business includes:The invest in port with own funds; The development of port area land; Carring; Warehousing; Goods in transition and points to pull out; Port tally. Passenger and cargo transportation services; Transfer; Shipping lead and related services; Port facilities, equipment and port machinery leasing, maintenance; Commodity packaging processing; Work apparel manufacturing; Material supply and marketing; Marine oil supply, water supply ship, cargo agent level.