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For Mary Chen memo: I will gone to a business travel in Beijing at tomorrow.Right now I must discuss company the New Year's Day hold a party to Mary Chen. It's the time for me to do cell the Mary Chen. I'm about to say these things to him: 1,Hold a party need many,that is company employee sponsor,that is public many. A total of 4000$. 2,1000$ to buy the cup cake, beer, juice,cake,and other debris. 3,1000$ to change the employee Game Award，win game number one give some many to that one.Each game has a reward，that it‘s up to you to do things. 4,2000$ Mary Chen ,he go there ,places a band.You decide on to places what band.
