小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量。

This book once to be movies teleplay and the living theatre. Oliver Twist was the British writer Charles Dickens published novel in 1838. This novel based on the background of London, talk about an orphan who have a miserable experience and suffer, the protagonist Oliver Twist grow up in the orphanage and experienced the career of the trainee, he finally escape this terrible suffer, but when he was in the town, he was strayed a haunt of thieves, and the fierce outlaw force Oliver to keep company with them,