采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
This book once to be movies teleplay and the living theatre. Oliver Twist was the British writer Charles Dickens published novel in 1838. This novel based on the background of London, talk about an orphan who have a miserable experience and suffer, the protagonist Oliver Twist grow up in the orphanage and experienced the career of the trainee, he finally escape this terrible suffer, but when he was in the town, he was strayed a haunt of thieves, and the fierce outlaw force Oliver to keep company with them, The children, the street boy and the villains, and even the rich people.