单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
I have a friend,She is Janna ,she have black eyes and black hire.She is very smart and clever.She always help me to do something when I meeting some trouble.So,I Make friend with her I felling very happy.I think she will become to my beast friend forever. I have a friend,She is Janna ,she have black eyes and black hire.She is very smart and clever.She always help me to do something when I meeting some trouble.So,I Make friend with her I felling very happy.I think she will become to my beast friend forever.