小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

衔接成分偏少；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。

My beast friend is Kiko,She form China,she can speak Chinese and English.She is very smart and clever.she has blue eyes and black hire. She alway hlep me,when I meet some trouble.we wanna be singer,so we always to singing together.No pains,No gains.we will be achieve the dream. I am so happy to meet her,she is my beast friend ,We have deep friendship.