小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is Kiko,She form China,She can speak Chinese and English.She is very smart and clever.she has blue eyes and black hire. She always hlep me,when I meet some trouble.we wanna to be a singer,so we always to singing together.No pains,no gains.We will achieve the dream. I am so happy to meet her,she is my beast friend in the world ,We have deep friendship.