2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A beautiful city in China south,It's a small city.I bet you don't know it.Never mind.I will be introduced to you.Becuase it's my hometown. It is have a history and traditional culture, A beautiful city in China south,It's a small city.I bet you don't know it.Never mind.I will be introduced to you.Becuase it's my hometown. It is have a history and traditional culture, A beautiful city in China south,It's a small city.I bet you don't know it.Never mind.I will be introduced to you.Becuase it's my hometown. It is have a history and traditional culture,