2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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hello,Jack!I'm very happy that you will coming to my hometown.I will share you some interesting place to visit. First place is Yellow river ,this is the most long river in whole China ,you can see some wondeful vision in there .There have a lot of high montain.and you both can eat some tranditional food of China . Than you can go to the beautiful girl montain ,you can turn down the hurt from hot weather.As his name the beautiful girl montain,there really some beautiful local girl in there.They all very friendly. If you want to go shopping , i supposed you go to the stone of libar .There are the center of my hometown ,and there cloth are very beautiful and cheap. I hope that i can help you a lot ,and I'm very elabroate the day when you are coming.