2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Globalization provided not just discipline and an effective shortcut to credibility in economic policies. It would also unleash powerful forces to propel the economy forward The core truths of the global economy,deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts a long shadow on financial markets and makes it impossible for a nation to integrate deeply with the world economy. globalization collides with domestic politics, the smart money bets on politics. Remarkably, deep integration cannot sustain itself even when its requirements and goals are fully internalized by a country's political leadership.