2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文章衔接手法恰当；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

By reading for the article,I understand that there is an undeniable fact that deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts chasm shadow on financial markets and rather unlikely for a state to integrate deeply with the world economy. globalization collides with domestic politics, the smart money bets on politics. Remarkably, deep integration cannot sustain itself even when its requirements and goals are fully internalized by a country's political leadership.