2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

By reading for the article,to start with I understand that there is an undeniable fact that deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts chasm shadow on financial markets and rather unlikely for a state to piece out to a large extent with the world economy.In addition,when globalization and domestic politics are incompatible in particular with sovereignty.when the two collide ,an intelligent investor prefer to take politics collides with , the smart money bets on. Remarkably, deep integration cannot sustain itself even when its requirements and goals are fully internalized by a country's political leadership.