2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

By reading for the article,to start with there is an undeniable fact that deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts chasm shadow on financial markets and rather unlikely for a state to piece out to a large extent with the world economy.In addition,when globalization and domestic politics are incompatible especially have something to do with sovereignty.when the two collide ,an intelligent investor prefers to choose politics collides with , the smart money bets on. Remarkably, deep integration cannot sustain itself even when its requirements and goals are fully internalized by a country's political leadership.