2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇表达较恰当，高级词汇表达灵活。

By reading for the article,to start with there is an undeniable fact that deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts chasm shadow on financial markets and rather unlikely for a state to piece out to a large extent with the world economy.In addition,when globalization and domestic politics are incompatible especially have something to do with sovereignty.when the two collide ,an intelligent investor prefers to choose politics,deeply integrate incaple maintain itself so much even as its requirements and goals are fully internalized through nation's political leadership.