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Get on-line Good afternoon,everyone!Today let us talk about getting on-line.Nowdays,students get on-line too much serious.Computers make student play games a lot convient,so too many students very like it.Students study how to use the computer.So many students know how to use the computer. Many students study worse and worse in class.A part of students make friends in computers,this is a bad habits.I advice every students not play computer games too much.In summer holiday and winter holiday could go on-line.
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