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2008年12月英语四级作文真题:一次性塑料袋

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:15浏览次数:2646
要求:
Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags   
1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用   
2. 造成的问题   
3. 限制使用塑的意义
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句的使用。

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For a long time,plastic bags was widely used in our society,people was used to use the bag when they are out of the supermarket and then they will throw away it usually,which result in the bags become more and more.In fact,it is disadvantage for human and nature. In my opinion,we should be limiting the use of disposal bags as soon as possible.Maybe,someone should ask the reason,why we need take action for it?Use of disposal bags is better for human,and it's convenient for us.Actually,plastic product is not easy to resolve,if we use it once and once so that it can seen everywhere in our life,on a long view,our environment will destroyed the most important is will affected our life,we are going to face the problem. In conclusion,it is necessary to limit the use of disposal bags.

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