2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用高级词汇；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

By reading for the article,to start with there is an undeniable fact that deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts chasm shadow on financial markets and rather unlikely for a state to piece out to a large extent with the world economy.In addition,when globalization and domestic politics are incompatible especially have something to do with sovereignty.When the two collide ,an intelligent investor prefers to choose politics,deeply integrate incapable maintain itself so much even as its requirements and goals are fully internalized through nation's political leadership. Tom Friedman outlined in the article when the economy grows while politics might be result in shrink which it also explains the relationship between economy with politics.Moreover,global economy has the basic feature with about conflict between globalization and domestic social arrangements The clash is a core feature of the global economy. Consider a few illustrations of how globalization gets in the way of national democracy.