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For a long time,plastic bags was widely used in our society,people was used to use the bag when they are out of the supermarket and then they will throw away it usually,which result in the bags become more and more.In fact,it is disadvantage for human and nature. In my opinion,we should be limiting the use of disposal bags as soon as possible.Maybe,someone should ask the reason,why we need take action for it?Use of disposal bags is better for human,and it's convenient for us.Actually,plastic product is not easy to resolve,if we use it once and once so that it can seen everywhere in our life,on a long view,our environment will be destroyed,the most important that is will be affected our life,we are going to face the problem. In conclusion,it is necessary to limit the use of disposal bags.