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2015年高考作文优秀范文:登山活动

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:2411
要求:
  星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
  1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
  2. 活动的过程;
  3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
  注意: 1. 词数120左右。
  2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

By reading for the article,to start with there is an undeniable fact that deep globalization National and democracy are incompatible duo to democratic politics casts chasm shadow on financial markets and rather unlikely for a state to piece out to a large extent with the world economy.In addition,when globalization and domestic politics are incompatible especially have something to do with sovereignty.When the two collide ,an intelligent investor prefers to choose politics,deeply integrate incapable maintain itself so much even as its requirements and goals are fully internalized through nation's political leadership.Tom Friedman outlined in the article when the economy grows while politics might be result in shrink which it also explains the relationship between economy with politics.Moreover,global economy owns the basic feature with about conflict between globalization and domestic social arrangements because globalization holds up national democracy. It also mentions duo to too much trade regime ,there is no clear boundary between national sovereignty and international obligations. The relationship between democracy and globalisation in global markets is strained.The main contents as follows:Firstly,limit democracy for the benefit of minimizing international transaction costs, overlooking the economic globalisation.Secondly,people can restrict globalization and build democratic legitimacy or at the expense of national sovereignty establish globalize democracy which good for reconstructing the world economy. This shows we cannot have both.So if nation require endeavour over globalized world economy,sometimes we have to give up democracy.But "global governance" tell us we can drop nation states rather than democratic politics because ensure that powerful global institutions and standard-setting powers

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