雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Nowadays,many people are more tend to trval to other countries because of the traffic is very convenient and people are more like to enjoy the beauty of view. But i want to say that people to trval to other countries have a negative effect. There have two main reasons to support this idea. Recently,many people are trval to other countries that caused many bad effects, because they has impolite behaviour. For instance, many people throw garbage at random. people put their foots into the fountain pool so that the water of fountain pool was populated. Because of these things, foreign people may not welcome our, this is a bad thing, this also cause bad effect for our county. The other reason is that to trval to other countries will improve other countries' economic. I think it's not a good thing , we can use this money to develop our country 's economic to fascinate other countries people. Besides, this also can help our country's company,making company has strong competive . In conclusion , people can trval to other countries but must have polite behaviour.Besides, our country also has many fascinating view ,we also can trval it.