2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加几条从句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I can not image if our life without computer, nowadays we can not leave it as it is very important to our daily work,life,study etc. With the rapid economic development and the life quality raise up, everyone has computer ever a seven years old child. First and foremost, computer can promote our work more efficiently, it's account ability fast and accurate may be 5 times than human's brain, it is true our task has changed to be very easy. Secondly young people can learn knowledge from it even adult. I would like learn English from it and it's really convenient. Some people like watch movie from it and it's for free, download interesting book, searching News, actually computer can save our money. We rely on computer but we can not lost in it, some report shows that many teenage crazy for computer games, they refuse to go to school even go home. Computer really help us a lot, but if you don't known how to use it in right way, it may be destroy your happy life.