雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Nowadays,many people are more tend to travel to other countries because of the traffic is very convenient and people are more likely to enjoy the beauty of view. But i want to say that people to trval to other countries have a negative effect. There have two main reasons to support this idea. Recently,many people are travel to other countries that caused many bad effects, because they have impolite behaviour. For instance, many people throw garbage at random, people put their feet into the fountain pool so that the water of fountain pool was populated. Because of these things, foreign people may not welcome our, this is a bad thing, this also cause bad effect for our county. The other reason is that to travel to other countries will improve other countries' economic. I think it's not a good thing , we can use this money to develop our country 's economic to fascinate other countries people. Besides, this can also help our country's company,making company has strong competive . In conclusion , people can travel to other countries but must have polite behaviour.Besides, our country also has many fascinating view ,we can also travel it.