2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

高级词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。

Nowadays,many products are on excessive packaging.Walking on the commercial street,we are surrounded by all kinds of the products packaged excessively.And the most wonderful packaging one would be shown on the center of the stores for increasing customers flowing rates. Indeed,it can catch people’s eyes.But,sometimes it makes people chaostic and tired . For attracting more customers,many stores would decorate the goods by splendid and colorful wrapping papers.Because the stores around them may use the beautiful wrapping boxes or papers,so they have to seek the more attractive ones that are likely to impress customers deeper. With the market competition becoming increasingly intense,from my perspective,it can be understood and forgiven as getting higher profits.However,standing for the environment,it is unreasonable because it need more materials cut from the trees. It will damage the ecological environment.Therefore I think we should keep the balance between the environment and personal benefits.