小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Hello everyone l have good friend who staty with me all the time .He is cute and tall and he very likes the compurtergames ,so he allways takes me to play the games.He is seven years old and he is popurlar in our school,it is too magic right? Then , he loves music and lisen everday in his room,maybe it is not today,but it has been continund for many years!