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作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文中从句数量稍显不足，注意个别有错误的句子。
Lately,my good friend she fall ill.I was very afraid,she has caught a bad cold，have been in a fever，i want to see her,but monthly in the today.We must go there saw her just in rest day. The news student know，that some one do‘t care，that some one as me afraid her，we're discuss Sunday gone to see her，at this time my teacher arrival，ask me with mine go together.Sunday we visit my friend，she was better. After this i fell the day my classmate got injured has a better and bad.
