作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;请作者增加词汇丰富度,加强拼写检查;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Recently many students are busy in getting certificates,especially for the persons who want to find good jobs. Actally,it's very useful to find job with many certificates.Certificates can represent one's abilities on some aspects and they can indicate you are prepared for jobs.They take exams with different kinds of purposes,such as for getting more opportunities ,for fun,for catching up with others. In my opinion,getting certificates isnt a bad thing,opposite,it is countributed to our interviews.We can be more competitive than others to obtain more oppotunities.But it is not the more certificates the better.We also cannot be blend to pursuit certificates.We should have a right attitude to certificate.