熟练的采用了一些从句;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且要加强拼写检查。
There is an old saying goes "Thinking twice before doing". That is to say it is necessary to list all the choises when you make a final decesion. So it is not wise to make a decesion as soon as see something or hear someing. For many people especially students who are lace of understanding to the social, it is an reasonable to make a choice immidiately.
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