2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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The place in Hunan The topic about take a foreign friend to my hometown,where are we going? every places have different sense.In China,this is a big country.It has mang priences.so,it has many beautiful place. I lived in Hunan.It is a interesting place.If i tode a foreign friend to there,i will bring him to go to Changsha to eating dilisious foods and watching a great movies.It is a prefect thing to do.And i will take him to climbing a mountain that it call "yuelu mountain".The place is very nice,many local people like to climbed it.i believe it will be good. If you like my expensive,you can go there,i will take you to playing.This is my ideas.so do you have interested?