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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec. 26th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hobnail,tom Subject: To establish business relationships Dear Sir or Madam, I knew your new product of No. 5670 in the exhibition held in New York on the day of Dec. 15th to Dec. 22nd. I was quite interested in it. please send us the price table and instruction. thank your for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship. we are forward to your early reply. sincerely, Hu Bin
