2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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computer and man Nowadays computer is very useful in our lives . People work with it and can talk with friends by it and can study and find some imformations what they want by it, yes, it seems very useful and helpful more and more. but I think we ignore one thing that is computer brings us not only closer to your friends but also ignore some love. Now you can see people can come online everywhere,people don't need to chat with their famiy after work ,they think they can find funs and find what you want by computer.even there are several computers in a family and everybody has their own one. people begin losing hugs and kisses and cares for people who are with in their lives. For examples most parents hope family has a pleasant meal and enjoy more time together, but when their children come back home,they seldom chat with their parents instead of chating with others by computer. they hurry to finish their dinner then hurry into their rooms online, play computer games ,watch movies , read news or work and chat by computer, what a terribly nuisance! Man needs communacation face to face and improve friendship and love, man needs hugs and kisses from their relative that is a kind of courage and strength that computer can't replace.