2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇量积累需要继续努力，尤其高级词汇还有很大提升空间，另外拼写检查还需加强。

The most obvious manifestation of the global imbalances is the global crisis which comes into being deficit and surplus economies. alleviating income inequality which any nation, however large or small, wealthy or poor can prevent the global imbalances from worseningand to minimize the loss of the situation. income inequality must be controlled in both the financially advanced and less developed countries. With inequality lessened, the former countries may overcome deficits through a higher saving rate while the latter can limit surpluses through a lower saving rate. There would be no alternative in the long run to dealing directly with the problem of income inequality. The lesson learned from the three-decade-long OECD experience is that financial liberalisation can only buy time but may store up trouble for later with a much larger debt problem