2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句的使用；词汇量积累方面尤其高级词汇的积累要再接再厉，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

The most obvious manifestation of the global imbalances is the global crisis which comes into being deficit and surplus economies. alleviating income inequality which happens any nation, however large or small, wealthy or poor should prevent the global imbalances from worsening and minimize the loss of the bad influence. income inequality must be controlled in both the financially advanced and less developed countries. With inequality lessened, the former countries may overcome deficits through a higher saving rate while the latter can limit surpluses through a lower saving rate. There would be no alternative in the long run to dealing directly with the problem of income inequality. The lesson learned from the three-decade-long OECD experience is that financial liberalisation can only buy time but may store up trouble for later with a much larger debt problem