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With the development of techonology, online shopping has been agreeed by more and more people and now has become a fashion. Many things has pros and cons, and oneline shopping is not a exception. On the positive beside, first of all, people shopping online can save many time to do something else. What's more, people can find more things than real shops and can compare their price to decise to buy which one. Last but not least, online shopping can breake out the restiction of area, people can buy something which in romate places. On the negative beside, there are something fake online. If you don't focus to them, you will buy something fake.Then if you buy something which further than where you are lived, you must to spend some time in waiting it. In my opinion, it is very conveninent for modern people, but some problems still exist. So I think the goverment should improve the relate legal and the consumers should more concern when you buy something online.
