高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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With the development of science.The more families have their own cars.Many people think the car is a very convinent transport.It makes our life much easier.For traveling,it is comfortable and safe by car.The qualities of our lives has increased.Our country has became richer. But on the other hand,many people think we shoule more take bus instead of cars.Because the cars bring much pollute.It is our duty to protect our environment.With more cars,the more accident has happened. It is very danger.It is very dificult to park cars. So many things have two sides.